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Write Right: Still More on the Traffic Fairy

SUMMARY

Sometimes, several different signals intelligence packages are related and should be written about together in one report, as opposed to several different reports.

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Dec 19, 2005

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Mar 01, 2018

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DYNAMIC PAGE -- HIGHEST POSSIBLE CLASSIFICATION IS TOP SECRET // SI / TK // REL TO USA AUS CAN GBR NZL (U) Write Right: Still More on the Traffic Fairy FROM: of the Reporting Board (S12R) Run Date: 12/19/2005 (U//FOUO) We had no idea that the Traffic Fairy was a bane on so many levels. The August column , which warned against including extraneous information in a report, brought e-mails informing us that the opposite problem exists: the assumption that one piece of traffic equals one report, even when the same event or situation is dealt with in several pieces of intercept. Several senior reporters described their efforts to overcome this delusion in their workcenters. (U) There appear to be two reasons for this phenomenon: the bean-counting mentality, and lack of organizational writing skills. An increase in reporting is a Good Thing, right? Higher numbers in the periodic statistics impress management when it comes to rewards, and if the numbers are presented without comment, or are not examined in depth, the 1 = 1 mentality is reinforced to the detriment of the ability to integrate related material in one piece. (U//FOUO) Never mind that it is a disservice to your customer to make them read half a dozen reports on the same situation or event to get a complete picture. If it's not time-sensitive, hold onto it while you search for related, corroborative material, and integrate that information to optimize the presentation of the situation. Your customer will thank you. SERIES: (U) Write Right '05 1. Write Right : Too Much Redundancy is Redundant 2. Write Right -SIGINT Myths: The Traffic Fairy 3. Write Right : There Is No Index of Forbidden Words 4. Write Right : Avoiding SIGINTisms 5. Write Right : A Note on Validity Wording 6. Write Right : Brevity Can Impede Clarity (or, A Capital Situation) 7. Write Right : Opening the Traffic Fairy's Packages 8. Write Right : Management Theory Applied to Reporting 9. Write Right : Give the 'Key Points' Style a Try 10. Write Right : Still More on the Traffic Fairy "(U//FOUO) SIDtoday articles may not be republished or reposted outside NSANet without the consent of S0121 (DL sid_comms)." DYNAMIC PAGE -- HIGHEST POSSIBLE CLASSIFICATION IS TOP SECRET // SI / TK // REL TO USA AUS CAN GBR NZL DERIVED FROM: NSA/CSSM 1-52, DATED 08 JAN 2007 DECLASSIFY ON: 20320108